One pale day
when I will be all sad and dejected, disappointed by life. Sitting by the
window with my head perched on the table looking out at the rain and the dark
grey desolate sky. I would be lost somewhere in the melancholy of it. And then
you would come. Sit by my side and not say a word. Without breaking the silence,
without ruining the sanctity of the moment, you would just sit by my side. And
bring your head by mine. You would look at me warmly with the intensity of those
eyes, your hazel eyes swirling with molten honey. And gently you will bring
your scented fingers to my hair. And you will stroke them. You will stroke them
with all the love you have ever known. You will run those slender fingers
between those glossy black hairs as if you waited a lifetime for this moment.
And your soft pores will absorb all the pain and sorrow. And I would just sit
quietly, close my eyes and let you be the healer, let you be the nurse. Let you
wrap yourself around me like a child. Let you be the balm I have waited for
eternity. I’ll let you soothe me, comfort me, nurse me back me to health. Let
you caress all my wounds. Let you be that coat in the cold. And in that moment
I know I will be fine, I will be good. I will be healed, all my pain gone all
the sorrow whisked away, all my pangs dissolved, all my sadness vanishing into
thin air.

This is such a beauty! The simplicity of it: a desolate end and a saviour, a nurse, one who cares. And the act of simply stroking the hair of someone you love and care for, also celestial and common place simultaneously. Each line, it just stands out. There is this pure sensuality in the beginning and line number 10 onwards is just art... Enviably good! This is a piece with lots of powerful lines and ones with entities of their own. You have grown as a writer! :) Cheers!
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